Friday, January 28, 2011

99th Page Blogfest

I just learned about this interesting blogfest hosted by Alicia. The idea is that we post the 99th page of our WIP's. I had no idea what was on page 99 so I took a look. I think it's interesting - how about you?


When reading my page and all the others, keep in mind these three questions:

1. Would you turn to page 100?
2. Why or why not?
3. Is this a book you might want to buy.



My 99th Page:


Lissa awoke with a start. A bone thin, black cat with long straggly fur had curled up next to her while she slept. The doll laid face down within reach of her fingertips. She snatched it and hid it in her pocket.
Gently she got up so as not to disturb the cat's slumber. The witch was also still asleep when Lissa went to the window, intent on viewing the hut's surroundings. The white horseman rode through the clearing, and soon the red horseman followed. Light streamed in through the windows of the hut. The day had dawned.
The witch opened her cold, black eyes. Her bones lurched and cracked as she made her way to the door. Before stepping outside, she whistled for her mortar and pestle. In an instant they appeared with her faithful broom. She climbed into the mortar and gave Lissa a smile, revealing two rows of long, sharp teeth.
“I leave you to your work, my dear,” she said and was gone.
“Where should I begin?” Lissa wondered aloud. She was no stranger to hard work, but accomplishing all of the tasks was going to be impossible.
“All I can do is my best,” she said with a shrug. She decided to begin with the hardest task first – sorting the chaff from the wheat.
The skulls lurking on the fence were far less menacing in the light, but their eyeless glare and her thoughts of how they came to be there caused an involuntary shudder. Forcing her mind back to the task at hand she looked around the yard for the bushels of wheat.

Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Nathan Bransford's First Paragraph Contest: My Paragraph

Nathan Bransford is holding his first paragraph contest again this year. If you wish to enter go here - contest ends Thursday.


For fun I entered last year and I decided to enter this year as well. Even if you don't want to enter it's still very interesting to read all the beginnings. You soon get a feel for what an agent's slushpile looks like and the good beginnings really start to stand out.

Anyway I'm posting my first paragraph to get some feed back from all of you. When I submitted the first chapter of my current WIP to my CP's they all really liked it, but they had issue with this first paragraph.

Let me know what you think and be honest - I really want to make it better:



The ambient lighting companioned with the reclining sofa and a holoviewer, immediately made Tina crave popcorn. Wishful thinking. Even if she hadn't been there to view an ultrasound, popcorn had been banned for years. More precisely, butter and salt had been banned and who wants popcorn without butter?

Monday, January 17, 2011

What If You Couldn't Write Anymore

The lies we live will always be confessed in the stories that we tell.
 ~ Orson Scott Card

This is probably old news to everyone else, but I just learned that Orson Scott Card had a stroke on New Years day. Fortunately, aside from some slurred speech and trouble with his left hand, he's supposed to make a full recovery. 


I've only become a Card fan in the last few years and I haven't liked everything that I've read of his, but since I've recently been listening to the Ender series on cd I feel bad that this happened to him. I was stunned by how good his novel Speaker For the Dead is. I'm so glad he'll be able to continue writing.


Imagine if you couldn't write anymore though. I've only been writing for two years and sometimes I've felt like quitting, but now I don't think I can quit. It's addicting. What if something happened to you where you no longer could put words to paper and all your characters and stories were locked in your brain and there was no way to set them free. 

There once was a time when it was against the law for blacks to read or write. Just imagine. 

Suddenly I feel more appreciative that I can do it. Since I can do it, I'm ending this blog post and I'm going to start writing right now.


If you've never read any of Orson Scott Card's work you're missing out.

Happy Martin Luther King Jr. Day everybody.
Let Freedom Ring!

Friday, January 14, 2011

Walking Your Way To Clarity

The sovereign invigorator of the body
is exercise, and of all the
exercises walking is the best."
~ Thomas Jefferson


I think there might be a correlation between how much walking I do and my writing.

I went through a period over the summer and into the fall where I didn't do much walking and my writing output dropped way down.

For Christmas my in-laws gave my husband and I a gym membership and I've been walking again. The clarity of mind and the flow of ideas that have been coming lately is awesome. 

I began a new story recently with only the first inklings of a cool idea, but I wasn't sure where to take that idea. The time I spent walking has supplied me with so many plot lines, I have to rush home and write them down before I forget them all. And maybe my butt will go down a few sizes as well.



Walking helps me when I'm stuck. What helps you?

Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Blog Stats, The Motivation Shark and a Giveaway



My fab CP, Tiana Smith wrote a very interesting post on how to increase the number of people who view your website and how to track who is reading it. For more info please go to Tiana's website Spilled Ink.


Speaking of tracking blogs stats, I just realized blogger has a stats tracker. It tracks how many people have looked at your blog in the last day, week, month, and all time. It lets you know what posts were your most popular and it shows you which ones are still being viewed now. It does more than that so go explore and see what you can find.


According to the Stats my most popular blog post ever is Feeling The Motivation Shark. It's so funny that it's my most popular because it's so random, but it is an amusing post - check it out here if you'd like.


I'm feeling a little bit of the motivation shark this week. I've arranged with one of my CP's to submit a chapter a week to her and if I don't get it done she'll get after me and I'm doing the same for her. It's still true -- without some kind of motivation shark on my tail I don't write.

Also want to let everyone know that the book Across The Universe by Beth Revis is debuting today and one of my fav blog friends, Lori Walker is giving away an Arc of Across the Universe - go to Lori's website here. Read first chapter of Across the Universe here.

Friday, January 7, 2011

We All Have To Start Somewhere


"You will never win if you never begin." 
~Helen Rowland


I love books and because I love books, I had a growing urge to write books. Sounds easy enough, but five years went by where all I did was want. I was too afraid to try. I didn't know where to start and I didn't know how to find out how to start.

Then I reconnected with an old friend. Guess what -- she was writing a book. I never knew anyone who was actually writing a book with the intention of getting published before. Suddenly writing seemed a little bit more possible. She told me that writers write.

So I took that first step. I wrote a first chapter to a story. I reread it a few times, did some editing and sent it off to her for some feedback. I didn't believe it was a masterpiece or anything, but deep down I thought it was pretty good. 


This is what my friend had to say about my first attempt at writing:

"First off. In my humble unpublished opinion, you have a lot of natural ability. I've been to several writers workshops and your stuff is better than 90% of the slush out there. You have a lot of potential with your story. It's not a genre I'm too familiar with, writing for children has different rules. But your writing is very readable. Everything made sense and I could follow you're organization clearly.
 You can write my friend, You have tension, you have vivid descriptions, the beginnings of complex characters, reality and most importantly a piece of yourself.
Don't stop. I could give you a line by line critique but I'm not going to, because you need to finish the first draft."


Isn't that great feedback. I was on cloud nine after reading that. I had natural ability and good instincts. Yay, I could write. So, I pressed forward. I took some writing classes where I learned some basic tools for writing. I read lots of writing blogs. I attended writing workshops and conferences. I learned and applied what I learned to my writing and I knew I was getting better. 

A year went by and I decided to reread that original first chapter, curious to see how far I had come. Guess what I learned. While my friend was truthful in saying I had natural ability, she was being very, very kind to me. That first attempt was bad. I was embarrassed at how bad it was. I'm so grateful that she didn't do a line-by-line edit, because my humble little chapter would have been covered in red ink. 

I'm so grateful for my friend who was kind enough to leave me with some hope. Sometimes I read over my writing and get discouraged that it's not what I want it to be, but then I think back on that first chapter and I remember - We all have to start somewhere and I've come a long way.

So, how far have you come?


Monday, January 3, 2011

The Goals And Friends I Made in 2010

“You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream." ~ C.S. Lewis

I want to thank everyone who commented on my last post. Thank you for your encouragement. I think I made it sound like I didn't meet any of my goals and that 2010 was a failure and that is most definitely not true. Some really awesome things happened last year and some of my goals were met. 
I don't look like Catherine-Zeta Jones, but my hair is long and in my opinion quite pretty and I do look a lot less like the frumpy lady. My fab in-laws also just gave my husband and I a gym membership, so maybe I'll get a little closer to having Catherine-Zeta Jones' body this year.

I didn't get to ride motorcycles but I did spend some time pondering over campfires with my family. 

I didn't make it to Bryce Canyon, but I did have an awesome mini-vacation with family at the Zermatt Resort in Midway, Utah. 

I didn't do as much writing as I wanted, but I did do some and one of my short stories won honorable mention. I came up with three awesome story ideas that I hope to finish rough drafts on this year. I also joined an on-line crit group and an in person crit group.

I did make lots of writer friends and even though I didn't post this as one of my goals last year, it was something I wanted to work on. Not only did I meet that goal, I surpassed it.

Check out all the awesome friends I made this year:




Danyelle Leafty: http://danyelleleafty.com/
Stephanie McGee: http://novicewriterchronicles.blogspot.com/
Sara B. Larson: http://sarablarson.blogspot.com/
Janyece(Nisa) Swineford:  http://wordplayswordplay.blogspot.com/
Stacy Henrie: http://stacyhenrie.blogspot.com/


One of my favorite Authors - Emily Wing Smith, Me, Brodi Ashton and Alaina Evans
Emily Wing Smith came to my book club - so awesome

I also attended a few book launches:

Paranormalcy book launch
  Paranormalcy by Kiersten White


 Alaina Evans, Me, One of my favorite authors - Sara Zarr, Natalie Whipple and Jenn Johansson at The Dark Divine book launch
The Dark Divine by Bree Despain


 Matched by Ally Condie
I also met one of my favorite authors - Shannon Hale


I attended 3 Writer Conferences:

My class at the WIFYR Conference
All awesome writers - taught by the super awesome Dave Wolverton


And I attended my first Murder Mystery Party - 

Bachelorettes and Bullets:
 
All in all - a pretty good year.

Saturday, January 1, 2011

Maybe This Year


Tomorrow is always fresh with no mistakes in it.
- Anne of Green Gables

In 2011 I want to look like this:
Well, at least look a little less like this:
I want to spend more time in places like this:

While I write of a place that looks like this:

 
I want to do more of this:

and maybe a little of this:

Surrounded by beauty like this:

Where I can ponder over this:
 

I want my house to look like this:


And no longer like this:


But mostly, I want to do more of this:


This was my New Year's resolution post from 2010 and I don't think I met any of my goals - so glad I have another year to try again.

Welcome to 2011 Everyone!

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